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Unsteady Sturdy Stable  

justpervin29 50M
266 posts
8/10/2015 4:29 am
Unsteady Sturdy Stable


He drops down
out of the cab
of his trusted oversized pickup,
kicking up
a small puff of dirt
as his boot heels
met the ground.
A subconscious
fix of his hat
and then his belt,
is made
as his door swings shut.
He tilts his head
for a better view of her
as he walks around
the hood of the truck.
The metallic moan
of the door swinging upon
fades into the night.
Her legs gracefully slide
from the floor mat
to hanging outside the cab.
Reaching up
His hands
conform and cradle
her waist.
Her hands
float down
until they rest on his shoulders.
He eases her down
out of the truck.
She practically slides
down his body
till her feet feel the earth beneath.
She had landed closer than he intended
but not as close
as he secretly wanted.
He wasn’t sure
if the electricity he felt,
when she put her hand
into his,
was from her,
the approaching storm
or his endorphins
wanting to break free.
Seems folly to think
a storm is brewing
when the denim night sky
is lit up like rhinestones in the sun.
But the way the breeze
sways and flirts
with the hem
of her short lil sundress,
all in unison
with the sway and flirt
of her hips,
there is no denying
something is building.
The air gets hotter
and thicker,
with every step closer
to his house.
The humid heat,
is like an unseen weight,
makes it harder to breathe.
The anticipation,
of what dreams may come,
made each step quicker
and each breath a bit harder.
Stepping upon
the fourth generation porch,
that still has most of the timber
his great granddaddy
had cut,
they both stop and simply
look at each other.
Minds and bodies
both conversating
without saying a word.
Her smile to him
continues to shine
as the clouds congregate
in the heavens above.
Single clouds
all funneling like the crowd
bunching at the church door
as most of the sparse town
heads into sunday service.
This growing mob
of clouds
begins to hide
the moon from view.
Gentle hand
meets hardened chest.
Through the flannel,
he feels the softness
of her skin
as her hand
fins its place
upon his chest.
He catches the distinct
seductive storm smell
that is interwoven
with the damp heat,
telling him
exactly what the night
has planned.
The nearly crackling electrons
of electricity
saturates the night air
like pheromones.
He pulls her close.
Denim meets cotton.
Soft rugged lips
meets soft firm lips.
Each losing themselves
in each others kiss.
They feed off each others passion
and the heat they generate
makes the muggy summer night air
seem cool in comparison.
Their bodies
press closer together
as their tongues dance and dart,
in their playful and hungry exploration.
The building breeze,
listens to Mother Nature’s
square dance call,
and pivots into
an allemande right
forming a small dust devil.
Mother nature
foot stomps the steps
and the dust devil follows
in unison.
Drifting pivoting twirling
like a young
following bubbles in the wind.
The impromptu dance
tips his Stetson
to the side of his head.
The kiss interrupted
causes both to chuckle
at the playful nature
nature has tonight.
Adjusting his hat,
these soon to be lovers,
smile at each other
before the wind
ushers them inside.
The unseen influences
of these moments,
are most definately felt
and building in intensity.
The dance
is just a building block
for the inevitable torrent
and eventual release.
The friction and tension
of two forces colliding
competing
and joining
in a natural symbiotic union.
The pounding in his chest
joins the acoustic sounds
of the horses in their stalls
becoming worked up
by the approaching storm.
The fireflies disperse
as the colts and stallions
become filled with energy
that make their bodies move.
His lips once again
find hers
and never leaves
as he picks her up and carries her
through the old hickory door.
Her legs straddle his frame
like it was her saddle.
The heel of his boot
nudges the door shut.
The homestead
would be a home,
if even just the night.
His boots clang
down the hallway
into the bedroom.
His effort
to minimize the sound
was a bit unnecessary.
As if the neighbors,
the next door down,
wasn’t far enough away.
They were well past
the back forty,
as if all that seclusion
didn’t afford them
enough privacy.
The lovers’ fingers
drift across the buttons
and zippers
of each others clothes,
like the leaves
in the strengthening zephyr.
Lips never failing
to cling to each other
as the lovers’ hands and fingers
can’t peel each others clothes away
fast enough.
Her fingers
break the bonds
of his big belt buckle
like a bolt from the stable door.
Pulling the bottom of his
black and red flannel shirt
free from his
‘goin ta town’ jeans,
she is free to continue
to unwrap
the candy before her.
Sliding her hands up his chest,
that’s been forged
from years
of dawn till dusk
endless manual labor,
she eased his shirt
off his shoulders.
His smooth rawhide hands
were as delicate as a surgeon’s
as he pulled her sundress off,
up over her head.
His hands
rolling over her
like the approaching stromwall
crawling across the sky.
His looming frame
and carnal need
backs her up
to the bed.
Heat lightning
strobes across the sky
as an opening salvo
to what laid ahead.
Darkness and light
square dances
across the prairie sky.
Self and nature,
nature and self.
Him and her,
her and him
all in a brewing storm.
His bare chest
and unfastened jeans
show the top of his underwear,
one final barrier
to what she hungered
to know.
She stands before him,
bronzed by southern sun,
in nothing but her bra and panties
like a vision from a dream
dreamt long ago.
They couldn’t be any closer,
yet clearly,
were not nearly close enough.
HiIs fingers
perform the delicate act
of unfastening the clasps
of her bra.
She can feel
the trials and work
his hands have done
as he slides the bra
off her slender shoulders.
His breath catches at the sight
of her unabashed.
The faint sound
of the starting to buck and bray
within their stalls
is the ambient noise
to his breathless admiration..
The storm seems to drive
the pace of the lovers hands and lips.
Or maybe in a cosmic shift
it was the lovers’ passion
that stirred the storm.
The crackle of thunder echoes
as their bare chests
press together.
Her breasts flatten
against the wall of man before her.
This encounter
is as ferocious and sudden
as the coming storm.
There was no prelude,
rapid unbridled build up,
just two forces of nature
finding a balance
and fulfilling a need.
The rain starts slowly
drop after drop
against the window.
Slowly the sprinkles
turn to rain
until the window
is slick and covered.
She clings to him
wanting all of him,
wanting to rain down over her.
He turns her around
as the rain
can be heard
hitting the roof.
The bedframe creeks
like the branches
of the trees in the swirling storm.
The storm,
their unrelenting desire,
swells in intensity
and the horses
in the barn
are already
growing restless.
Thunderclap
after booming thunderclap
makes the mustangs
want to break free
find a way out.
Sight blinded by flashes
of lightning.
Hearing muffled
by thunder.
Her moans grow closer
and the reverberation
felt upon their skin.
His invasion
into her
fills her in ways
she never knew existed.
The grip she exerted
around him
made each thrust and pull back
that much harder
and that much more perfect.
Thier moans
and sound of two bodies overrun
with desire and pleasure,
compete to drown out
the sounds of the storm.
His attention
must refocus.
He runs headlong
into the storm.
The rain is relentless.
The storm is out of control
and he needs to make sure
the horses don’t escape
the barn.
With every movement forward
makes maintaining
what balance he has
that much more unsteady.
His inability to prevent
the stable
from being overrun
become that much more
a reality.
With each progression
he is was met with even more rain
soaking him
little by little.
His becoming slick and saturated.
The wind continues to swirl
and whip about him.
Each movement
met with strong resistance.
So much accepting resistance,
he has to use his entire body
to press onward.
Leaning into the storm
as it wraps around him,
as it consumes him.
The sound of the stable’s side screen door slamming
grew louder and louder
as he approached.
Recurring percussive banging
as the door
slammed against the frame.
This storm
had it’s own organic cadence.
A progressive totality.
Slam...slam
slam, slam, slam
slamslamslamslam.
Slam...slam
slam, slam, slam
slamslamslamslam.
The nature of the night
continued to fiddle
with this prairie countryside song.
The force
of this tempest
never seemed to stop building.
The horses
wanted to escape
to be free of the barn.
The way they whined and brayed
he knew corralling them
was a futile attempt
but he had to try.
He had to hold back
against the surging storm
for as long as he could.
The winds
made its progress of its lifecycle.
The gentle whispering breeze
had given way to
the delicate rustling and hum.
The building crescendo,
now had the wind
nearly breathless
as i whooshed and moaned
in betwixt
the rushing inhale
as the tempest
clung to the energy
it was quickly exhausting.
He throws himself against the barn door
Slamming himself
with all his might
over and over
bucking against
all that the storm
throws at him.
The barn seemed
to billow and contract
with the changing pressure.
One of the horses
breaks free
and shoots from the stable.
He strains
with all his might
the slam the doors shut
as the storm
wants more from him.
His muscles taught,
as he tries to hold on.
Soaked,
exhausted
trying to stop the inevitable
as the storm
wraps around him
consuming him whole.
He can’t breath
as the storm leaves him breathless.
His will to resist nearly broken.
His legs beginning to shake
as they struggle
to not fail.
His grunts
can be heard
amongst the crackle
of the thunder.
He pushes hard
and each time
he has to push harder still
as the horses
clamored to break free.
The constant bucking
weakened his resolve
more and more
each time he thrashed
and pushed harder.
He was soaked to the bone
to the point it seeped into his soul.
There was beauty
in this ravaged battle.
The sensualness
the<b> violent </font></b>forces
both cooperating and competing.
He threw himself
against the barndoor
with all his might
letting out a mighty roar.
But it was not enough.
He was cast aside as
horses broke free
surging
into the wetness.
It was like the stable pulsed
shooting them out
into the storm.
Exhausted
soaked
and content
that he tried
and did all he could.
There he lay spent.
The barn emptied
and barron.
The storm quieted
as the liquid nature
dripped from the sagging roof.
All the effort,
all the turmoil,
wore on his body
till the moon
started shining thru the clouds.
The hot humid tension
of the storm had abated
and a refreshing cool
settled in the night air.
The unexpected warmth
and tranquility of the moment
filled him in an unexpected way.
The raw natural beauty
helped fill
his still racing heart.
The night air
snuggled in,
resting upon his chest.
He wanted to stay here forever
if not at least a few moments more.
Reality pushed it’s way in.
Forever would need to last
just a few minutes.
He places a hand down
to get to his knees
and push himself up.
For it was time
for him to clean up
this wonderful mess
that he had made.

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justpervin29 - comments are most welcomed.


LadySBBWGodiva 58F
81 posts
8/12/2015 1:12 am

A billion "Likes", my friend!!!!

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justpervin29 replies on 8/12/2015 4:11 am:
Thank you Glad you enjoyed was kind of a challenge to myself. Had a thought of how horses bursting out of the barn could be a metaphor for male climax and dared myself to try and write a story around that premise. So great to see you and so great you liked it thank you

LadySBBWGodiva 58F
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8/12/2015 4:01 pm



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Sapiogurl 61F
3997 posts
2/17/2016 2:50 pm

Wow, wow, WOW. YOU are an amazing writer! You've made complimentary comments on all my junk but my stuff is merely spank bank worthy. YOUR writing is art and true talent. I am looking forward to reading more tonight.

I dare you to come up against me in a business letter though...ha ha ha

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justpervin29 replies on 2/17/2016 4:58 pm:
You are far to kind thank you.

I hope our writing get the same effect just different paths. One bends you over the table and pulls your hair the other one slowly backs you up against the wall and lets the the proximity and heavy anticipation. Both giving the reader that urge, passion, and desire. I know I have enjoyed your blog.

As far as coming up against you in a business letter I think you are probably very formidable in may areas though up against you does have a nice ring lol

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